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What do you think? This is a first draft.



sorry, that one was soooo big it's unviewable... try this one




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Ehhh, let's be picky, just for you.

1. You still misspelled Turbulence in at least one place.
2. Your intake isn't "Chrome Intake", their name is "Chrome Intakes". Just being anal here.
3. I don't really understand why you'd use the Ebay Names for the companies that sold you the Voltage Stabilizer or the Front Strut bar, honestly my man, it looks a bit tacky.
4. You have a large variation in your Capitalization. Double check it so it's even, you have some first words in caps, others not.
5. I do not make the shift/ebrake boots, they are from my wife, Lizgiggles, or her company name, Custom Vinyls.
6. You should change your gauges to "AOS Racing Reverse Glow Gauges".
7. The "Alarm System" section should have your disclaimer taken out.
8. You have your AOS Gauges listed 2 times.
9. It's Midnight Wolf, not Midnight Wolf Customs. http://www.midnight-wolf.com/menu_menu_1.html
10. Metallic Specs or Metallic Specks? Might wanna look up the difference in the words.
11. You have the Turbulence Badge listed 2 times. It's not a "Kspec" badge, it's KDM, or OEM, Kspec does not make any products.
12. The clear corners are the same, KDM, not Kspec, they dont' make shit.
13. Your taillights are not Altezza's, that's a brand name of a car. They are either Aftermarket Taillights, or "Euro Lights".
14. Under your name, where you have "Transmission", you have a ) there for some reason.

 

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REDZMAN: I would like to start by saying I recognize you as the formost expert on Hyundai Tiburon parts. I would also like to thank you for giving me a very good once-over on this.

I've identified parts the best way I can. I know K-Spec does not make parts. But they came from K-Spec. It's the company that actually branded the box of parts and marketed them to me. Besides, K-Spec has a nice ring to it.

My Altezzas are actually MajikTib's old ones. He sold them to me for $50 I searched e-bay when I got them because he couldn't remember where he got them, and they were labeled as "altezza tail lights" I have no idea where they came from.

<span style="color:#0000cc">midnight-wolf-customs</span> is the seller name on e-bay. I should change that though.

I bought the shift boots from a thread called "REDZMAN'S Custom shift boots". I kinda though they were your custom shift boots.

I'll make the changes.

 

Well, I knew you wouldn't want me to bullshit you, and that you were angry when we found the mistakes on the last one.

1. Even when I was 1/2 of Kspec, I called my parts KDM. KDM would be easily recognized, Kspec, not so much, by judges. Remember how much most of us go off on Shark Racing for rebranding everything theirs?

2. Calling those "altezza" lights is like calling your ZEX system NOS. It's just NOT the same thing. Similar, maybe, but not the same.

3. Please give my wife or her company credit, she'd just love to see that.

 

looks good man, i still think that parts list will get old pretty soon. i also like how you have redzmans name in there hehe neat. it looks pro but also borrow a pro 8.0 megapixel camera for that shot. resolution is like 3000x2500 pixels it'll be great!

 

I have a good picture, but it got ruined by whatever program my graphics designer uses. This is not my work. This is his. I don't have any tallent when it comes to drawing. I'm giving him $20 for a completed poster. But with these changes, i'll probly make it a bit more.

 

Yeah, I've been wanting to do a display board for some time, but since mods change, I don't want this kind of thing.

I've got something in the works, that's for sure.

 

I don't see where Turbulence is misspelled.

 

^^^ Under Exterior, where it says "K-SPEC Turbulance Emblem"

 

Dude, drive up to Huntsville and I'll take a *real* picture of your interior!
And CapItAliZatioN could use a lot of help LOL
Looks pretty good otherwise.