haha, from a rap standpoint i don't think your going to sell a single record. kit i think you need a girl...

 

^ heh smile.gif

 

OP man tnx, finaly someone enjoys it, it might suck ass but at least i tried, i tried promoting RD and showing back some respect for it and you guys gotta shoot it down, damn, I havent seen anyone else make poems or raps.

 

I can't say that it's great, but you tried, you actually made sense and stated lots of true facts together in a form of poetry. So, I gotta give you props.

 

well not all of us shot it down...needs a little more work. as a rap it won't work, but as a poem i see it...

 

ok kit said i have to put something up here since i write stuff anyway so i figured id throw something up, its not as korny as kits, lol

whats up bjtch like you dont know me dude
my flows nice and your shjts crude
Breakin the N/A, 14 second barrier?
fvck that man im boosted, my shjt will bury ya
ill show you how to drive cuz man you need some skills
ill teach u to ride and im not talkin cheap thrills
you and me both know my shat looks sicker
and no matter how good you get, ima be quicker
...Dont test me son


if it doesnt flow when you read it, you shouldnt be reading it lol

 

I think white guys should stop trying to rap...

 

^ werd

 

yah ill just sing some real music, something like heavy metal right? good cus i just wrote a song

AHAHHHHAHAHHAH ill kill you
AHAHAHAHAHAA come see my strength
HAHAHAHAHAHAH your so GHEEEYYYY
ahahhahahhahAHHHAHAHAHAHHHHAAH

put that in front of some "sick" guitar and itll be a hit, because im white. but if i was black you would go tell me to rap, friggin racists...

 

Oh uh, do I see a sequel to 8mile coming...hehe laugh.gif